I sprinted through a long forest it was a fine day.I saw a small cute cuddly kiwi then i saw a hole in a rock i thought
We were going home from school when we found a path. We sprinted through a long forest. It was a fine day. We found a small cute cuddly kiwi, then we saw a hole in a rock. We thought that it was a normal rock… But before we knew, a bear crept out of the bush and it went for us. Then before we knew, a lion took out the bear with a tiger. I saw a lot of black and red eyes. I smelt a whisper of smoke. The smoke lead me to a log cabin.
“The End” by Tyrese
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